“Fall Frenzy: Watch Out Below” is the second piece discussed at the critique session held during the Spring Conference at PAQA-South. Here are the results that were such a tremendous help to me. I am so grateful to these artists for their instruction!
1. Remove 4″ off right side to assist the shape of the small boy, and it doesn’t add anything anyway.
2. Add more falling leaves so it doesn’t look like she is holding a bouquet.
3. Add shading to the wall behind the decking as its brightness distracts from the focal point.
Narrative Textile Illustrations 
Great piece of art. Love it.
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The changes only add more beauty to an already wonderful piece of art.
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