“Fall Frenzy: Watch Out Below” is the second piece discussed at the critique session held during the Spring Conference at PAQA-South. Here are the results that were such a tremendous help to me. I am so grateful to these artists for their instruction!
Critique Session Suggestions:
1. Remove 4″ off right side to assist the shape of the small boy, and it doesn’t add anything anyway.
2. Add more falling leaves so it doesn’t look like she is holding a bouquet.
3. Add shading to the wall behind the decking as its brightness distracts from the focal point.
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Wife, mother, retired educator, emerging artist. Mary has lived in 10 states and enjoyed them all ~ Minnesota, Wisconsin, Texas, Illinois, Kansas, Hawaii, California, Utah, Minnesota (return), North Carolina with long term visits to Colorado and Arizona. She likes to travel and create textile art. She has exhibited at the Page-Walker Art Gallery and History Center in Cary, North Carolina; Emerald Art Center, Springfield Oregon; Woman Made Gallery, Chicago, Illinois; Spartanburg ArtIst Center, Spartanburg, GA; Durham-Orange Quilt Show; Minnesota Quilt Show; the Mid-Atlantic Quilt Festival and the Quilt Fest of New Jersey.
Mary A Ritter, Artist ~ Storyteller 
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Great piece of art. Love it.
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The changes only add more beauty to an already wonderful piece of art.
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